Comments on: Write sexy SEO content (for any industry!) https://seocopywriting.com/write-sexy-seo-content-for-any-industry/ SEO Copywriting Training and Content Writing Tips Wed, 14 Aug 2013 14:53:38 +0000 hourly 1 https://wordpress.org/?v=6.5.2 By: Heather Lloyd-Martin https://seocopywriting.com/write-sexy-seo-content-for-any-industry/#comment-7285 Wed, 14 Aug 2013 14:53:38 +0000 http://www.seocopywriting.com/?p=17943#comment-7285 In reply to Helen.

@Helen – the best approach is to keep digging. I’ve gone as far as cutting people off and saying – “That’s not an USP” and showing them competitor sites that say the same thing (sound familiar?) :) If you can do this in a funny, lighthearted way, the client usually gets it. Not always. But usually. And then a deeper conversation can take place.

You can ask them to talk about the cases that have really stood out for them personally. What were the specifics? How did they help? What makes that particular case stand out? When you can get the client to go off autopilot and start telling stories, you can often tease out some wonderful information. You just have to get them past “soundbite speech.”

I hope this helps! :)

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By: Heather Lloyd-Martin https://seocopywriting.com/write-sexy-seo-content-for-any-industry/#comment-7284 Wed, 14 Aug 2013 14:48:54 +0000 http://www.seocopywriting.com/?p=17943#comment-7284 In reply to Matthew Newnham.

LOVE your ideas, @Matthew! Thank you! :)

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By: Helen https://seocopywriting.com/write-sexy-seo-content-for-any-industry/#comment-7283 Wed, 14 Aug 2013 00:34:11 +0000 http://www.seocopywriting.com/?p=17943#comment-7283 Great article Heather. Personally I really struggle with lawyers. Every time I do a briefing meeting I ask them what makes them unique or why clients should choose them over their competitors, and I always get the same old answers – “We really listen to our clients (no, we *really* do!)”, “we tailor solutions to your needs”… ugh! “We’re the best” – OMG seriously…

What’s your approach when you really can’t get your client to pin down any sort of USP?

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By: Matthew Newnham https://seocopywriting.com/write-sexy-seo-content-for-any-industry/#comment-7282 Tue, 13 Aug 2013 13:42:30 +0000 http://www.seocopywriting.com/?p=17943#comment-7282 @Brian

And as for those goofy ideas, sometimes, it’s actually very useful, I find, to exaggerate to illustrate.

The point is to get your client’s prospects to make a highly memorable connection between their commercial [i.e. serious] requirements and your client’s industrial strength solutions.

If I was in the need for a serious A/C solution, I’d want to know it would stand up to a beating, in severe conditions.

Remember the gorilla jumping up and down on the Samsonite luggage?

[And decades ago, Timex ran TV ads for years, depicting Timex watches in extreme scenarios, e.g. strapped to the ankle of an elephant wading through mud, only to keep running smoothly. The tagline was: “Timex: It takes a licking and keeps on ticking.”]

Just sayin’…

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By: Matthew Newnham https://seocopywriting.com/write-sexy-seo-content-for-any-industry/#comment-7281 Tue, 13 Aug 2013 13:36:07 +0000 http://www.seocopywriting.com/?p=17943#comment-7281 Couldn’t agree more, Heather. They say the essence of comedy [apart from timing!] is the juxtaposition of two seemingly unrelated ideas that gets us laughing.

On that note, and in that spirit…

“A company that repairs doors only for commercial businesses.” Hmmm, two ideas spring to mind [just in the first 5 seconds, so I’m sure there are better ones out there]:

1. A bouncer, only admitting commercial clients

2. Monsters Inc style theme [you know, the doors they went through?]

Anyhoo, like I said, that’s just in the first few seconds…

As for the commercial A/C and heating units, I immediately thought of this scene from Good Morning, Vietnam:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DpktBGInl60

Funnily enough, I was ‘chatting’ on Facebook a year or two ago with an Australia who is in the A/C business. He [like the boring Lt in Good Morning, Vietnam] thought he was funny. Trust me, he wasn’t.

I told him if he wanted to really get funny, he could go wild on Facebook, with all kinds of jokes about being too hot or too cold. He sort of took the bait, but barely. [And you can’t do this stuff well if you only dip your toe in the water timidly.]

Hope that helps!

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By: LouAnne https://seocopywriting.com/write-sexy-seo-content-for-any-industry/#comment-7280 Tue, 13 Aug 2013 12:31:04 +0000 http://www.seocopywriting.com/?p=17943#comment-7280 I hear you, Brian! I’ve been writing about roofing products and building materials for over a decade.

I once compared underlayment for buildings to underwear for people and said something like, “Unless you’re Madonna, no one will ever see your underwear. But buildings need underwear for the same reasons you do…” The words got attention but, more importantly, the analogy worked well for the product. Good luck!

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By: Sally Mayor https://seocopywriting.com/write-sexy-seo-content-for-any-industry/#comment-7279 Tue, 13 Aug 2013 11:02:10 +0000 http://www.seocopywriting.com/?p=17943#comment-7279 Hi Heather,

Thank you SO much for this.
It’s come at a really good time as I’ve got a number of articles to write about a particularly dry subject at the moment. I need to do some creative thinking about how to tackle them…

Sally.

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By: Heather Lloyd-Martin https://seocopywriting.com/write-sexy-seo-content-for-any-industry/#comment-7278 Fri, 09 Aug 2013 19:13:12 +0000 http://www.seocopywriting.com/?p=17943#comment-7278 @Brian – try interviewing the client (if you haven’t already) and listen to the stories they tell. Chances are, you’ll be able to pull their unique benefits (and some pretty cool ideas) from the interview.

:)

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By: Brian https://seocopywriting.com/write-sexy-seo-content-for-any-industry/#comment-7277 Thu, 08 Aug 2013 22:02:40 +0000 http://www.seocopywriting.com/?p=17943#comment-7277 A company that repairs doors only for commercial businesses.

A company that provides portable A/C and heating units for commercial use only.

Go!

(these are actual clients, btw)

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By: Heather Lloyd-Martin https://seocopywriting.com/write-sexy-seo-content-for-any-industry/#comment-7276 Thu, 08 Aug 2013 18:52:22 +0000 http://www.seocopywriting.com/?p=17943#comment-7276 Thanks, @Ashley! I’m glad you enjoyed the post! :)

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